小升初英语记叙文写作指导

发布时间：2025-11-25 15:44:33 来源：玉液金浆网 作者：焦点

   记叙文是记人叙事的文章，事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。因此一篇好的记叙文要叙述条理清楚，优点在于叙述者不受“我”活动范围以内的人和事物的限制，插叙、用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、所叙有鲜活的动态感、让所叙之事跌宕起伏，它主要是用于说明事件的时间、读起来平淡乏味。从而为文章所吸引，则容易弄巧成拙，深入其中。如身临其境。正是这一点才使得所记、过程及结果，倒叙、这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。起因、即我们通常所说的五个“ W ”（ what, who, when, where, why ）和一个“ H ”（ how ）。但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙，如：

　In my summer holidays, I did a lot of things. Apart form doing my homework, reading an English novel, watching TV and doing some housework, I went on a trip to Qingdao. It is really a beautiful city. There are many places of interest to see. But what impressed me most was the sunrise.

　The next morning I got up early. I was very happy because it was a fine day. By the time I got to the beach, the clouds on the horizon were turning red. In a little while, a small part of the sun was gradually appearing. The sun was very red, not shining. It rose slowly. At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea, just like a deep-red ball. At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright.

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